tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post6988539970353285208..comments2023-04-05T07:24:33.593-07:00Comments on T's Subplot: Cemetery Stomp~T~http://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-20602154543343258732010-11-04T19:38:55.029-07:002010-11-04T19:38:55.029-07:00It's excellent craftsmanship. Not great theolo...It's excellent craftsmanship. Not great theology (and I know it wasn't meant to be). The poem's a really enjoyable read.Jim Swindlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632113399696237695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-74276843779286765452010-11-03T09:35:43.103-07:002010-11-03T09:35:43.103-07:00A poetic romp! Loved it!A poetic romp! Loved it!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-16228137517115216832010-11-02T18:40:32.729-07:002010-11-02T18:40:32.729-07:00creative you.
wow.
lovely tale.creative you.<br />wow.<br />lovely tale.Jinglehttp://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-55985427224220183962010-11-01T20:58:29.381-07:002010-11-01T20:58:29.381-07:00Absolutely wonderful! Top drawer, to be sure!!Absolutely wonderful! Top drawer, to be sure!!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-24058482757880982262010-11-01T08:48:52.084-07:002010-11-01T08:48:52.084-07:00Thanks, everyone! This was a fun one, though I wi...Thanks, everyone! This was a fun one, though I wish I could recapture the phantom stanza 5 that I thought of while jogging.<br /><br />Dick, thanks for pointing that out! Is it better now?~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-60613445505782305342010-11-01T03:56:22.621-07:002010-11-01T03:56:22.621-07:00Oh, this is so charming. I love-love-love ".....Oh, this is so charming. I love-love-love "...no hair to style and a permanent smile". Fabulous piece, T.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-1235481315104141192010-10-31T17:15:22.002-07:002010-10-31T17:15:22.002-07:00Very entertaining. I like that she decided to '...Very entertaining. I like that she decided to 'hang' with a student :)Sue Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15864986500627496240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-43834786149324823802010-10-31T16:03:05.825-07:002010-10-31T16:03:05.825-07:00Clever, neatly constructed and very funny.
Could...Clever, neatly constructed and very funny. <br /><br />Could I make a small suggestion? In the last verse in stanza 6 you've picked up an extra beat in an otherwise faultless metrical pattern. Might 'she thought to move on would be best' be an idea?Dickhttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-11202116787045915212010-10-31T09:23:08.284-07:002010-10-31T09:23:08.284-07:00Wonderful, absolutely wonderful.
Gosh, you're ...<br>Wonderful, absolutely wonderful.<br />Gosh, you're good.<br />Even better than the old 'Monster Mash.'philhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00982447727380510674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-32395672416647314832010-10-31T07:53:45.878-07:002010-10-31T07:53:45.878-07:00she obviously has music in her bones! Loved this t...she obviously has music in her bones! Loved this toe tapping poem!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-43253427466687993342010-10-31T06:15:44.195-07:002010-10-31T06:15:44.195-07:00I always wondered where those class-room skeletons...I always wondered where those class-room skeletons came from! loved your tale behind the broken gravestone.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-50196509200554235062010-10-31T04:25:27.453-07:002010-10-31T04:25:27.453-07:00hehe :) i like this skeleton.. she's very live...hehe :) i like this skeleton.. she's very lively :D<br /><br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/10/28/afterlife-2/" rel="nofollow">My Magpie</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6758910723184875167.post-79962800449565761672010-10-31T02:02:26.209-07:002010-10-31T02:02:26.209-07:00I love this elegant and lively - and pragmatic - s...I love this elegant and lively - and pragmatic - skeleton. Well told!Walnut and Pearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02611882321651638156noreply@blogger.com