She felt like a princess that night,
Cinderella, dressed in airy white,
fitting in, for once, with festive fools,
in borrowed jewels that sparkled
like the sapphires of her eyes.
She thought she could have danced the evening long
In flawless shoes that seemed, at first,
to fit her slender feet,
daintily displaying tiny toes.
Unpolished, but blessed with a child-like grace
she kept up with society's circling pace,the joy of dancing filling all her thoughts.
Now, surfeited with sambas and foxtrots,
her feet feel flat,
confined.
Stepping out for air,
she finds her shoes stuck fast
in someone's snare.
She freezes, faced with selecting her fate--
If a prince should find and save her, could she stay?
Become a princess, richly shod each day?
Though fatigued, her feet don't hesitate,
swiftly slipping out to homeward flee,
to heal her heels,
set toes and arches free...
and retrace shadows of the swirling steps
on the safe, familiar floor.
I love your whimsical and clever Magpie! Cinderella-like in its magic.
ReplyDeleteI loved this -- and I love your header! Well done on both counts.
ReplyDeleteA clever revisit tothe favorite fable! Oh, yes. I like this!
ReplyDeleteEven without the direct Cinderella reference, it's very much Cinderella. Nice.
ReplyDeleteLove "heal her heels"...your poem felt "swirling" as a whole.
ReplyDelete-Dina
What a beautiful poem, you certainly are talented.
ReplyDeleteIt does "swirl" when you read it,just like a dance.
Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteRetelling Cinderella with success takes talent. way to go!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of purposefulness in her decision.
ReplyDeleteYour retelling gives her strength of character :)
T---That was wonderful! My sis said you were linked to this website. It's fun to see what everyone does with the picture! Hope all is well.
ReplyDeleteCorrina :o)
ah, so fun to dance, yet so fun to sit and stretch the toes when done...smiles. a magical magpie...
ReplyDeleteBrilliant Cinderella tale.
ReplyDeleteShe made the right choice..go home ,girl! Princes are a dime a dozen..
ReplyDeleteVery good!
A great Cinderella-ish story...only with a different kind of freedom for this girl!
ReplyDeleteReally enjoy the light rhythm to enhance the fantasiful mood.
ReplyDeleteclassical and talented tale!
ReplyDeleteLoved the poetic images, but so glad you brought attention to the 'familiar floor' (unpolished boards) while we were all concentrating on the shoes!
ReplyDelete~T~,
ReplyDeleteFrom the dream to reality like a shakespearean work or a song: "From a Jack to a King, from loniness to a wedding ring."
Dreams are necessary to goal setting but we need reality to achieve them.
Well done Magpie.
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