The Circus With the Yellow Clown, 1967, Marc Chagall
Given the choice between
bread and a circus I'll
favor the pastry a-
bove any clown,
un-
less there are elephants,
gigantenormously
dressed in their finery,
coming to town.
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I just discovered the
form "double dactyl" and
had to attempt it for
this weekly poem.
Hard as I tried it's one
syllable over. Think
you can do better? Then
try it at home!
I took a quick glance at the 'double dactyl' form, knew I was in WAY over my head ~ I believe you did a fantastic job!
ReplyDeleteNever even heard of this form.
ReplyDeleteBut I like the flow of it!
=)