Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Perfect Storm

 

 
bring on the rainstorm
your love is my umbrella
you blow me away
hold me in a gale-force hug
save me with a big wet kiss
 
 
 
 
 


13 comments:

  1. Ahhhh, that gale-force love!

    Great job, T!

    =)

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  2. I love "your love is my umbrella." Lovely poem.

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  3. Not so sure about wet kisses - I prefer mine dry! LOL

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  4. wet kiss in a rainstorm.
    Perfect!

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  5. PS. My offering today is a Halloween story poem if you'd like to take a look before the 31st passes us by:

    Halloween Horror: A Ghostly Tale

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  6. Doesn't get better than this ......

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  7. Really like the notion of love being an umbrella...

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  8. I remember that Damon Runyon character who kept saying, "Nicely, nicely." It would fit your post perfectly.

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  9. Rain? Who cares! The essence captured nicely here!

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  10. Delightful - who would even notice the rain?

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  11. Ah, very clever piece. It reminds me of how much I love the rain! Kudos!

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