Saturday, January 11, 2014

Typical


New York at Night, Vivienne Gucwa 

Shimmering Northern Lights
should have been visible,
south to Seattle, be-
cause of a flare--
but for a closer storm,
tempestologic'ly
drenching my lashes, ob-
scuring my stare.




6 comments:

  1. then carry aviator goggles then.
    easy!
    :)

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  2. That's too bad! (Not the rhythm--I quite like dactyls--but the difficulty of seeing above the clouds.

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  3. Drenching my lashes ~ delightful to contemplate.

    ** Not getting to many blogs this week, attempting to solve a few problems. Nothing I can't manage (I think.)

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  5. Lovely poetry ~ well penned ~ poetry is such a treasure ~ carol, xxx (A Creative Harbor)

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  6. Surely, you're still writing?

    And I promise not to call you Surely.
    :)

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