Shimmering Northern Lights
should have been visible,
south to Seattle, be-
cause of a flare--
but for a closer storm,
tempestologic'ly
drenching my lashes, ob-
scuring my stare.
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then carry aviator goggles then.
ReplyDeleteeasy!
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That's too bad! (Not the rhythm--I quite like dactyls--but the difficulty of seeing above the clouds.
ReplyDeleteDrenching my lashes ~ delightful to contemplate.
ReplyDelete** Not getting to many blogs this week, attempting to solve a few problems. Nothing I can't manage (I think.)
"T's Subplot" has been included in the Sites To See for this week. Be assured that I hope this helps to point many new visitors in your direction.
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Lovely poetry ~ well penned ~ poetry is such a treasure ~ carol, xxx (A Creative Harbor)
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ReplyDeleteSurely, you're still writing?
And I promise not to call you Surely.
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