Grains of time
descend incessantly, settling on hair, weighing down eyelids,
sticking to toes, stuffing a nose, accumulating like unopened
mail on any level surface. I try to sweep, scrub time away.
It simply slides to another corner, lurking, obscuring the
important, filling pockets with hurry, worry,
slyly hiding purse, keys, documents,
things we need right
now!
I
wish
I could
gather time in baskets
take it outside, moisten it with tears
mold a time castle, paper it with memories,
drape it with dreams, define sufficient space
to savor life's salty sweetness, served on good china,
wipe it dripping from your chin with silken kindness
to amble at a toddler's pace, or scamper, skip for joy
to read collected works in quiet corners, inhale lilacs' incense
to watch the cloudscape drift with wondering open eyes
curl new tiny fingers, comb silver hairs until time blows away,
dissolves, and we are left to flourish in vast eternity
Fantastic.
ReplyDeletethis piece is so good- hard to express how wonderful this is...the shape of the lines into an hourglass poem is the cherry on top of your sweet sundae of a poem.
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ReplyDeleteJust beautiful.
So much packed inside that little hourglass.
How perfect!!!
ReplyDeleteShape poems are extremely difficult I would think, especially to make them flow together, perfectly line. So aw2esome!
ReplyDeletevery nice...love the line...comb silver hairs...so much there...bkm
ReplyDeleteHow brilliant, to shape the poem to it's subject! Kudos!
ReplyDeleteMay the hourglass be filled with the sands of... great style, love it.
ReplyDeleteThank you for dropping by my blog.
~T~,
ReplyDeleteI love the uniqueness of this poem; both words and shape. A clever take on theme. It's difficult to find a new way to say: make time your own and you've done it.
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simply a marvelous piece.. beautiful words
ReplyDeleteAh, life served on good china. Beautiful piece, lovely thoughts. Well done.
ReplyDeleteSo nicely written. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteDear T,
ReplyDeleteForm and form. Lovely to read and look at. Thanks for taking such care with this poem. A pleasure.
Gathering time in a basket ... what a lovely concept!
ReplyDeleteA very well-shaped piece, in more ways than one!
ReplyDeleteYour words are so beautiful here. I do know what you mean sometimes it would be nice to trap time to use for things that nurture us.
ReplyDeletethis was gorgeous, in both shape and meaning.
ReplyDeleteRene
wonderful poem. Great shape
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Wonderful poem, written in a cleverly crafted shape! Excellent post! =)
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excellent job...the form and hte words are perfect...nice mag!
ReplyDeleteWOW!!!! I LOVE what you've done with this poem! It is visually an amazing idea!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletep.s. I'll take ya up on the Boggle Game and canning. ;o)
How utterly refreshing... on all accounts! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, everyone, for your silken kindness.
ReplyDeleteterrific job!
ReplyDeleteOh, this is just beautiful. My eyes actually teared up when I came to "inhale lilacs' incense" ...for mourning this summer past, not to mention all the years before it.
ReplyDelete...simply a beautiful uplifting magpie... the sky is holding
ReplyDeleteThis is full of so many wonders....I love it ~T~!!!
ReplyDeletewonderful form and i love the placement of the transition. well done T!
ReplyDeleteI love how you structured your words and told your story of time in the shape of the hourglass. Very clever and creative.
ReplyDeleteI want to live on the bottom side of time...everything is so peaceful there. Beautiful magpie. I feel rejuvenated just reading it.
ReplyDeleteI actually was going to attempt something similar and scratched it because it wasn't quite working for me. You, however made it work for you and for your poem as well. No snowflakes or sand, just words to fill that figure. I love it,
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