red
leaf
flutter
in the wind
clinging to your branch
majestic evergreens look on,
unshaken by the season's change, wait to see you fall
My son's third-grade teacher introduced us to Fibonacci poems on a field trip. My son was more interested in the numbers, and in drawing pictures of his subject. I hope he'll find some words, too.
Great imagery. I like the word placement.
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery of the evergreens looking on. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteI first read this left justified. Very hyperbolic, I thought. But center justification is nice too.
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